Child of the Stars
Ann Arbor, MI
Ahh...I don't remember this, but I enjoyed it this time around. Sort of made me wince, though, because of all your itsy bitsy grammatical errors. (Its is possessive, it's is a contraction. To is a preposition/adverb, too is an adjective. Catch my drift? ) I realize it's a repost and everything, but it's just hard for a grammar kid like me not to be put off by those types of things.
The poem itself was wonderful...You've uncovered some unique issues concerning relationships in general, some things of which we're not always aware.
"How inimitably graceful children are in general before they learn to dance!"
--Samuel Taylor Coleridge