I love how you take an image and then transform it as the reader moves down your poem. For me it was image transforming into image, wind transforming into bird, etc... like a pink floyd video... hehe...
Terrific writing, Suzie... you have a way of surprising me with something unique and different that I somehow never thought of doing myself. Ok, so that sounds vain, whatever...
Glad to have you sharing with us in Haven... thanks for your contribution!
Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.