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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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dusk carries the lone rattle calling all to gather joining at the right shade of curtain voices carrying the word the word that humans tried to conjure around fire -a circle of eyes and blurred arms transporting time -the word of an organ under Bach's fingers pale moonshadows of this the original I hear tonight I wonder if it is the rehearsal the angels warming up their lips... The earth will vibrate in ecstatic expectancy |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
voices carrying the word the word that humans tried to conjure around fire ~*~ thank you... rare are the times when the music is so softly played... that the angels cry.... Bri...you have no idea, [which is a cliche in itself] how much this feels to me... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bri . . . you must listen to Verdi Requiem the angels sing a much different tune pure beauty this and that xxoo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
-a circle of eyes and blurred arms transporting time ...... enjoying this part most... apart from enjoying the complete write itself... regards sudhir |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
brian Music is timeless, and writes to the senses of a higher plane...wonderful poem! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thank you I was just listening to the August bugs singing bouncing parts around like some minimalist composer gets to sounding like breathing after awhile  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Like the whisper between notes. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
It's funny that you say like breathing, because that's what I was thinking when I looked at the poem as a whole. The asthetic quality lends itself to a soft low rhythm - I really enjoyed that paired with the poem itself. psh - you get inspired listening to bugs. I have to beg and bribe my muse. whatever.  |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
It's beautiful poetry but I still don't understand the title. This, the original... heh... the symphony of sound. Nicely written, Mr. Sites... Parasite Faith is a fine invention |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderful writing Brian, I love reading this beautiful poetry of yours, thank you for sharing this with us Andy |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ya know...I already thought this was amazing, and then I read of your inspiration...and I was reminded...that you?...are truly beautiful. Love this, Brian...  "My friends are my estate." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How did I miss this? knowing now that you construct these instinctively, I'm more amazed than ever was at how profoundly the construction adds depth and layered meaning to the words. You ARE a madviking genius... or would that be? "you ARE a mad viking genius..." gleegiddy kissing you bri...  enimlegna! |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
wow |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
listening to the sounds of the night and remembering where it was I heard August bugs.... missing your writings |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Glad Kacy bumped this as I had not seen it before. I love the line breaks you use Brian, they add so much to the reader. Hey, how's about a new poem, too busy over summer? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well, I happen to know that Bri has had trouble logging in--prolly 'cause he lost his password and changed e mails addresses since then. I can prolly persuade him to write an administrator for help tho. I TOLD him ya'll missed him! (see, Bri? And nope I did not put anybody up to this.) nibble |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahem!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sure would love to hear/read more about those August bugs before it becomes September Always a pleasure to read you Brian Maree ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
guess we'll just keep this one humming hoping for a Bri visit soon |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Lovely... nobody doesn't like a fugue.. especailly when there's poetry like this to accompany it.  Love's a lovely lad |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This stunning poem is no exception to the general rule....when I read a poem of yours, I always find myself reading it several times through. Never fails! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks for bringing this back, Ed. It's still one of my alltime favorite Pips poems, and I really do miss this poet! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I am seriously enjoying this poem-mining I've been doing -- glad someone else is benefitting too! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Missing your poetry, Bri! -a circle of eyes and blurred arms transporting time wish you'd return for a moment |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile I was fussin' at him just last week, kace. and hey you--check your e mail. You inspired a story outta me. (I know it's not bri's poetry, but it's the best I can do until I can try to make Bri's fingers pick up a pen again.) Ain't he beautiful?  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hey K, my email server has been eating emails regularly! try my new one, by replying here oh Bri! we are chanting for you to come out of the woods for a moment PLEASE!?! |
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