mama whore baby slut once upon smiling an innocent smile to match smiling words clever reassurance. Spoke of promise neverending sacredness true,true tis love really love. Along comes a slipperly evil sucubus , a carhop whore, evil slut whispering sweet til it gets what it wants... all the cash hidden in ones heart... then spits you out... next !... waiting in line; always the fool chasing, slave to putrid instant gratification... What can one do when finally finding and it bites them sucks them dry of tears voice horse from screaming into the merciless uncaring night “WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME” mama whore baby slut once upon you darkling you heart shot never healing.
[This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (08-02-2003 12:54 PM).]
My interpretation at least of the shape of the writing is two arrows. One up, one down, squeezing a heart of all emotion. Since I know where this is borne I shall say no more other than I cry with you Dan. Love and Hugz, Your Sister, Shawna
Could Be Anywhere...
obviously...as with all poetry it is entirely up to one's own interpetation... isn't that the jewell of poetry...the ability to make it unique and personal? anyhoo...yes dear sister as usual you know me! the representation is of past and present with both arrows shot into the center of one's heart. lol perhaps a bit too oblique? thanks to y'all for the input...appreciated!