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0 posted 07-30-2003 05:28 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

Zebra

"Hey,
Mr Auto Car,
why'd ya make the Zebra cross?"
Its oh such an awful loss
and you'll never even count the cost
of your insobriety.

A disturbing lack of creativeness

I like to sleep
I like to leap with sheep
I gently creep
Into deep sleep
by counting leaping sheep.

Just having a bit of a laugh really

Andy

Rawr, rawr, rawr

© Copyright 2003 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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No replies? Aww
I thought it was cute!! I think you're cute too! oooh.. I'm full of surprises, ain't I?

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

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2 posted 08-05-2003 01:39 AM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Careful Erica, he's a strange one... *grin*

The zebra part still throws me lol

It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in

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Zebra's are cool.. I want to keep one as a pet.

Can I keep you instead?  You're a cutie.

Nice work, this made me smile.

"As a group, no one would call poets a particularly bubbly, chipper group."
James Pennebaker (psych prof.)

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4 posted 08-05-2003 05:22 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

Erica: Thanks for the reply, I really wasn’t expecting any replies, these were kind of “working myself back into writing kind of poems” rather than a serious attempt at writing, though I do think that they came out wonderfully. Cute

Rhonda: Thanks for the reply, I thought you said this was too weird to reply to, I could probably explain the Zebra thing to you on MSN if you wanted. Strange… :tounge:

Allysa: Thanks for the reply, I’m sorry to tell you that it would be impossible for you to own me as I’m public property, you could however buy a Zu Doll at your local toy store .  Cute

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Heya Zu!  I hate those little uncreative poems but for some reason, I liked yours.  Especially the second one.  The first is a bit difficult to follow, but the second one is catchy and I like the confession made by its title.

On a side note... yeah, you are a cutie.  Can I keep you too?  Just kidding...

Parasite

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When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.
~~~Emily Dickinson

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