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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Conversations with Dirty Puddles the sound of hope is swallowed up by apathy no anger left, no tears to cry just a black sack castaway. Just a bit of a vent  Andy Rawr, rawr, rawr |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
i liked the ideas of this...interesting |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
interesting. This is a very interesting piece, it could either be about one thing, or about many things, depending on the way you look at it. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah you found my soft spot, I l*ve a good vent, rant, rage. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
It wasn't me  Anyway, this was interesting. Reminded me of my life... hey are you taking ideas from my life??? (sweet)I really like this, it touched me on more than one level. I hope things are okay with you *hugs* ... Even though you're gone ... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Your words are positively sopping with meaning. Enjoyed muchly. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Me, I don't think I care all that much for vents. Oh well, that's just me... You're a decent poet regardless of what you write, Andrew. Always worth the read. Parasite |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I really dig the title - I just paints quite a picture, yanno? I have conversations with puddles all the time, out walking, and thinking - of course it's only after I'm done dumping my mind trash out that they become dirty. heh I like where this took me - nice job! |
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