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Marshalzu
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Conversations with Dirty Puddles

the sound of hope
is swallowed up by apathy
no anger left, no tears to cry
just a black sack castaway.

Just a bit of a vent

Andy

Rawr, rawr, rawr

© Copyright 2003 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-27-2003 06:29 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

i liked the ideas of this...interesting
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2 posted 07-27-2003 09:24 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

interesting.  This is a very interesting piece, it could either be about one thing, or about many things, depending on the way you look at it.
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Ah you found my soft spot, I l*ve a good vent, rant, rage.
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4 posted 07-27-2003 11:14 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

It wasn't me

Anyway, this was interesting. Reminded me of my life... hey are you taking ideas from my life??? (sweet)I really like this, it touched me on more than one level. I hope things are okay with you *hugs*

... Even though you're gone ...

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5 posted 07-28-2003 12:26 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Your words are positively sopping with meaning. Enjoyed muchly.
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Me, I don't think I care all that much for vents.  Oh well, that's just me...

You're a decent poet regardless of what you write, Andrew.  Always worth the read.

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I really dig the title - I just paints quite a picture, yanno?  I have conversations with puddles all the time, out walking, and thinking - of course it's only after I'm done dumping my mind trash out that they become dirty.  heh  I like where this took me - nice job!
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