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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-07-06 12:34 PM



Side-lined

I picture it
self imposed upon you,
unbottled dreams
floating the mind
wondering
if ever I reach
the other side
of this page.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-07-06 05:47 PM


Well I'm here, lady, tapping on the glass.
And I know you've touched ME many times.

Local Parasite
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Transylconia, Winnipeg
2 posted 2003-07-13 03:30 PM


Hm?  Wondering if you'll ever turn the page and get on with things?  It's up to you, really, whether you like what you see (which is already well behind), or whether you want to see what happens next.  

This is a different style for you, this and the last one I read... although I'm new to your work, I think I can still safely say that.  I hope everything's alright with you, Maureen.

Parasite

Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.
~Percy Bysshe Shelley

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