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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


0 posted 07-06-2003 12:32 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nakdthoughts


Everchanging

The clouds shadow my silence
framing my thoughts
as I write in its blue
wondering if you might
have loved me, if only
you had taken the time
to have known me...

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 07-06-2003 05:40 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

smile.

I don't just think so.

I KNOW so.

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Never close enough


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wondering if you might
have loved me, if only
you had taken the time
to have known me...

I feel as though I have felt this same way before, maybe in another time and place...

Wonderful write!
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Taking the time to know someone is as much a destroyer of love as it is a harbinger...

Be careful what you wish for, and even more careful what you regret.  It's not good to linger on the past, because unlike the future, it can't be changed--it is solid, petrified and dead.

Hah... liked your poem though, especially the title.  Very clever.

Parasite

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~Percy Bysshe Shelley

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