Yeek... I've seen this style before and it intimidates and confuses me. Haha...
Fighting inertia is a cool concept. Without it, we probably wouldn't have this wonderful place called piptalk, huh?
Nicely done, my friend... something I'd never be able to accomplish myself (I'm too old-fashioned with my writing), but nonetheless something I can appreciate. Anything that takes a good amount of work and time invested like this, is worthy of praise.
Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.
~Percy Bysshe Shelley