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Sudhir Iyer
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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 07-01-2003 09:21 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Attired in a black legacy
covered with cold rain
hiding infinite lightnings
of olive-green revolutions
of lifelong existence
amongst changing seasons
escaping paralysis
and fighting inertia
Poet deVine
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2 posted 07-01-2003 08:06 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I love your new picture!!!


Thank you for helping out with this. I can be read many different ways...an interesting form poem Sudhir!
Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 07-02-2003 10:27 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Thanks a lot Sharon ...

methinks, sometimes words are so jumbled that they pop out like crosswords and one can mix and match them to suit whatever he/she wants to get out of them...

Regards
Sudhir
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Yeek... I've seen this style before and it intimidates and confuses me.  Haha...

Fighting inertia is a cool concept.  Without it, we probably wouldn't have this wonderful place called piptalk, huh?  

Nicely done, my friend... something I'd never be able to accomplish myself (I'm too old-fashioned with my writing), but nonetheless something I can appreciate.  Anything that takes a good amount of work and time invested like this, is worthy of praise.

Parasite

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