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Poet deVine
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0 posted 06-23-2003 10:35 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet deVine




You Donít


You may think you know the truth
You donít
So why throw your barbs this way


Why donít you just speak your mind
You donít
Need to hide what you want say


Iím tired of playing this silly game
You donít
Know the story my friend


Stop trying to put the blame on me
You donít
Have the story, beginning to end.

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (06-23-2003 10:35 PM).]

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1 posted 06-23-2003 11:07 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

You don't need to take any of this....rock on!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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EXACTLY!
Amen to that
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3 posted 06-24-2003 09:31 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

You may think you know the truth
You donít


lol.. Ms Devine... those who protest the loudest that they know the truth are so often the ones who haven't a clue...

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4 posted 06-26-2003 12:59 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Interesting, Poet of the Vine... not my favourite of yours but still cute, and I like the way you worked the "you don't" into the context of each stanza... was nice.

A simple concept and a simple poem but no less a poem... well done.

Parasite

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5 posted 07-02-2003 06:42 PM       View Profile for fractal007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fractal007

Nice little poem.  I like your style of reminding all of us to think and "know the story" before we open our mouths to throw stones at people.

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6 posted 07-08-2003 07:33 AM       View Profile for timothysangel1973   Email timothysangel1973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit timothysangel1973's Home Page   View IP for timothysangel1973

I really enjoyed this one Sharon...I feel this way many times!

Very much enjoyed  
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7 posted 07-08-2003 09:15 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

First of all, I sort of "un-clutter" myself with blamers, as who cares whose fault it was anyway, just fix it right?  Great message in this one, and I sure hope it hits its mark as it hit the target Good one Miss deVine.
 
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