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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


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Collected Recall

I watch, another day goes by
and rains continue on.
The moldiness keeps creeping in,
no sunrise in the dawn.

The dampness wrinkles thoughts I wear,
irregulars become.
My stomach turns in knots forsaking
more the same to numb.

I'm missing all the warmth of once,
the longing, driven feel.
The moonlit nights of self-return
from sonnets in the real.

I praise the moments softness held,
the clearings of the mist.
And all the whiles of innocense
in loving, reminisced.

I seek the shelter from without,
within, when storm's died down,
collecting recall, ribbon placed
in rainbow colors, bound.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 06-20-2003 10:30 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

The moonlit nights of self-return
from sonnets in the real.


I praise the moments softness held,
the clearings of the mist.
And all the whiles of innocense
in loving, reminisced.


I seek the shelter from without,
within, when storm's died down,

collecting recall, ribbon placed
in rainbow colors, bound.

=================================

beautiful bittersweet write Poetess M,
such lovely poetic phrasing and images.


I seek the shelter from without,
within


love the word play and alliteration of that line.


The moonlit nights of self-return
from sonnets in the real.


what a lovely couplet that is. Beautiful.



No matter what the differences
No matter what the cost
When words become our weapons ...
All that's beautiful is lost.

DeVante'

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (06-20-2003 10:30 AM).]

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 06-21-2003 09:18 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I believe the rain here is getting to me..I have been having such soggy thoughts of late...
Thank you Janet
hugs
M
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3 posted 06-23-2003 01:24 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

We had some heavy rain a couple of days ago.  Ruined my night out with a few girl friends.  And I did neglect to bring my jacket due to the hot weather.  Rain can really be a pest, but at the same time, it's so tragically romantic...

And yes, I love the conclusion of this one.  Soon as the rain stops there's always a rainbow in its wake, so in the meantime just take shelter wherever you happen to be...

Very nice writing, M...

Parasite

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~Percy Bysshe Shelley

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 06-24-2003 10:50 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

A few girlfriends huh?  

And all I want is one (man...that is)
The rain has lifted yesterday and today and we have a few more days of reprieve before the thunderstorms begin by week's end.

And here I am stuck in here, cleaning with a break here and there ...
M

maybe I will go out into the sun and weed
sounds like a plan to me *s

thanks, LP

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-24-2003 10:51 AM).]

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