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Sunshine
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0 posted 05-28-2003 02:47 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine



Across the desert this song of wind
in plastic bag gets lodged against a fence
and Styrofoam cups lace the cactus like flowers
the beauty stung by nectar of carelessness
              
             in winsome write she penned again
              of lands that danced beneath her feet
              calling all greenery her very own
              bearing thoughts like prospects sweet


used to be across time to the horizon
purity would fill the sand
now to dig down to that place
takes shovels full of grace

              timeless bent by warranty
              that there by God one stands for we
              for what we have is blessed by far
              time not yet for naked stars


cast me out with thoughts of wind
but litter my soul not again

breathe sweet now land
sweep up the broken peace
make time a blotter that absorbs
the waste of  mans release

turn glorious again the throng
with poem's mending  song

             though if a word should slip my hand
             upon the paper blotting same
             should you catch the poem's write
             and the very poet's name

             put me then upon a shelf
             for some one place should be so rare
             as to catch the words of one
             though tumbled weed made threadbare


sift the clay with lullaby
so dear love makes all brand new
and takes the dust from covered helm
so wrapped the words are sky of blue


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-28-2003 02:50 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
aries_luv_ppl
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1 posted 05-28-2003 06:19 PM       View Profile for aries_luv_ppl   Email aries_luv_ppl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit aries_luv_ppl's Home Page   View IP for aries_luv_ppl

so gentle

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Marilyn
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2 posted 05-28-2003 06:44 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

This was very lovely and soft. Nice work you two.

Marilyn.
Janet Marie
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3 posted 05-28-2003 09:01 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

You two write like spun gold thread and silk lace together...this is pure poetry in motion. So glad you shared it again.

Darkness cannot drive out darkness ... only light can do that.
Hate cannot drive out hate ... only love can do that.
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4 posted 05-30-2003 04:03 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Beautiful....and so seamless it would be impossible to say who wrote what if you hadn't highlighted it... I can see why you'd want this one up again!

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5 posted 06-04-2003 10:59 AM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Eww, isn't litter gross?  

Lovely work you two... thank you for sharing this one, Sunshine, while we await the duet responses.  Come on guys, get your Bs in G.

Parasite

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~Percy Bysshe Shelley

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Martie?  What do you say...we should duet again, and soon?
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Karilea...I'd love to!!
 
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