Well well! I almost wondered which part JM did, then I noticed myself suddenly reading out loud. She tried to do free verse, Ron, but you can't teach an old dog new tricks. I saw a few hidden rhymes, a few tricks of sound... tsk tsk, bad girl...
I love the jellyfish image... it's very unusual, but really creates the impression of being insignificant, small compared to your surroundings. Guess you wanted to give her a theme she was familiar with, right? Flawless setup, Ron... you're good at this collaboration stuff.
white capped wave crests
curl in sea foamed swirl to the sand
caressing with consonants constancy
That's my girl!
Lovely work, you two. You can do something longer, ya know... nothing holding you back.
Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.
~Percy Bysshe Shelley