I'm starting to like your style, Eliza, particularly the subject matter of your poetry. Vulnerability is something that people today seem to see as a sign of weakness most often, as something to be avoided, which causes us to shell ourselves away from one another in our "little worlds" as you say. It is a tragedy, yes, that so many people feel this way. There are many ways to overcome it, as you've done with your songs and poetry, and as you encourage others to do...
It's not a sign of weakness, but one of courage, to expose your soft underbelly to the world for the sake of honesty. You wrote it well.
Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.
~Percy Bysshe Shelley