First, I am amazed JM how quickly you were able to write this duet when exposed to Rons techniques.
Have to admit, this worked better than I thought it would. Not that I didn't have faith in ya'll just that your styles are so far apart on the poetry spectrum in my head, that I wondered it you could write together and have it read as if written by one hand. And you did. Credit to both of you. And an extra gold star for you JM just for writing with him!! Your penance for some mothy misdeed perhaps?
Seriously, as I read, I quickly forgot that you both had written this. I heard one voice. Of course I recognize both of your signatures, though it's blended so well, it's difficult to say precisely who wrote what, whether it be lines, verses, words or editing. (Though I can spot Rons editing pretty well...lol)
Honestly Jams, a better poem than you think it is. Quit being so difficult and read this as you would someone elses poem. It rocks!
I have spoken...
[This message has been edited by Duncan (05-22-2003 10:40 PM).]