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Epilogue ... Fade To A Whiter Shade of Empty ... Duet with Capt. Ron

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Duncan
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25 posted 05-23-2003 08:02 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Oh yeah...NOW ya'll go on your 3 day weekend.  
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26 posted 05-23-2003 08:22 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, I think it's obvious how this was written. JM wrote the rhyming lines and Ron wrote the rest! Who could not figger that out?

The result was dynamite! Hats off to ya both
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27 posted 05-26-2003 02:45 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Is it Tuesday yet?  
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28 posted 06-11-2003 09:20 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Well, DUNCAN may have difficulties with regular replying... but suthern has no such hangups... just needed to be pointed in the right direction. *G*

Verses remain unwritten, chaining poet and pen
to the blank chasm born upon barren page.

No bridge of phrase to span
The distance from soul to written word
I find my mind in stammer speak
Pale thoughts of being heard

But I read this and think you both need to be taken out behind the woodshed for a thrashing... cause you're both fibbers to the nth degree about what you can and can't do. *G*

This is yummy. *G* (now how's that for using the ole dictionary??? LOL)
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29 posted 06-12-2003 07:46 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Michael ... thank you for your so very kind reply, sorry I took so long to say so...you must have replied to this while I was away from the forums with out of town company.TY groovy guy

Ruth... LOL ... ummmm...you better be careful...we might enjoy a good spanking rofl ... thank you so much for the yummy   the moth understands words like that. So nice to have you here in Sanctuary with us...I find its a nice place to read at night when sleep eludes me. Lots of treasures hidden here .TY Ruthie-girl.
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30 posted 06-12-2003 05:41 PM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

This was very, very nicely done. I must admit that I am not up on everyone's styles as much as others on here... I will say that if the two of the poets write like that together, I have GOT to start reading them separately.
Great job both.

Day after day I'm more confused,
So I look for the light through the pouring rain...

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31 posted 06-13-2003 09:04 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Thank you Ringo...such a lovely thing to say.
So nice to have you stop by and read...glad you enjoyed.

thanks to ALL who shared your thoughts on this dueting of moody muses

thanks again to Ron for all he inspires in me.

Im still imagining your voice ...
can see the sparkle in your eyes.
I cant explain your power over me
Its understated understood & beautiful.
cj

 
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