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Sven
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0 posted 05-13-2003 12:57 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

ok. . . so, the more intorspective stuff will go here. . . don't judge me too harshly folks. . .I'm finding myself again. . . and, who I was is definitely not who I am. . .

flowing today
finding that one is the other
there is something that he remembered
something that made him think of that
something that made him wonder

the rain

droplets of water that came from the sky
but, not from the sky above

from the sky in his mind

flowing like a channel of being from himself
he found that he was

was not like the rain

but yet, that he was like the sky
full of clouds and blue

winging his way to a place that only he could find

his heart

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1 posted 05-13-2003 05:00 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Not the rain, no... never the rain.  The sky overcast with clouds that drop the rain down.  You won't find anything by looking into puddles, so climb those raindrops like a ladder and find what they really have to offer...

I've been there too... and I'll probably find myself there many, many times down the line, as well.  My heart goes out to you, Sven.

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~Percy Bysshe Shelley

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2 posted 05-14-2003 01:47 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Sven....the weather inside changes, like that in the heavens...and is much more profound.  I enjoyed your thoughts here!
Sven
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3 posted 05-15-2003 12:46 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

thanks to you both. . .

and, LP, look for me next time, ok?  

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I was born on a rainy day, and still enjoy puddles, though not the floods.
But honestly, Sven, I do look forward to the cloudburst of YOU.
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5 posted 05-18-2003 02:06 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

"winging his way to a place that only he could find

his heart"


Do you think you can show me the way, too?

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