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Sven
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0 posted 2003-05-13 12:57 PM


ok. . . so, the more intorspective stuff will go here. . . don't judge me too harshly folks. . .I'm finding myself again. . . and, who I was is definitely not who I am. . .

flowing today
finding that one is the other
there is something that he remembered
something that made him think of that
something that made him wonder

the rain

droplets of water that came from the sky
but, not from the sky above

from the sky in his mind

flowing like a channel of being from himself
he found that he was

was not like the rain

but yet, that he was like the sky
full of clouds and blue

winging his way to a place that only he could find

his heart

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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1 posted 2003-05-13 05:00 PM


Not the rain, no... never the rain.  The sky overcast with clouds that drop the rain down.  You won't find anything by looking into puddles, so climb those raindrops like a ladder and find what they really have to offer...

I've been there too... and I'll probably find myself there many, many times down the line, as well.  My heart goes out to you, Sven.

Parasite

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~Percy Bysshe Shelley

Martie
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2 posted 2003-05-14 01:47 PM


Sven....the weather inside changes, like that in the heavens...and is much more profound.  I enjoyed your thoughts here!
Sven
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3 posted 2003-05-15 12:46 PM


thanks to you both. . .

and, LP, look for me next time, ok?  

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4 posted 2003-05-15 06:35 PM


I was born on a rainy day, and still enjoy puddles, though not the floods.
But honestly, Sven, I do look forward to the cloudburst of YOU.

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-05-18 02:06 AM


"winging his way to a place that only he could find

his heart"


Do you think you can show me the way, too?

M

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