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Of Decay: The Prostitute
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
love peels away the rocky putrid eyes fall away as the cold gritty death takes hold. gone to our dismay the long awaited sighs fall away as the cold gritty death takes hold. I've seen this moment time and time again throughout these years I've lived. I always knew this day would come, from birth to death and 'round again. when will I obey the lustful call of death, which seeks to hold at last my sensual body? he'll enter in that day, steal the kiss of my breath, and seize and hold at last my sensual body. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Trying my best to figure this one out. Let me read it a few more times... Oh wow... this is just awesome, Frac. I absolutely love your descriptions, your use of repeated lines, this piece overall. I saw a woman aging, decaying, and despairing after her lost life. You wrote this perfectly. I'm adding it to my library. Excellent work, man...  Parasite God becomes as |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is truly wonderful writing, I loved the repeated lines, they were used brilliantly and the whole peice, it was so well crafted, so beautiful and such a delight to read. Keep up the great work Andrew |
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