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Riley
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in the pouring rain


0 posted 04-04-2003 03:41 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Riley


darkest in the hour night
through the window into it will we fly
consoled and frozen in the time
laugh at the face that haunts you
it follows your every thoughtin head
crushing dreams you once thought had
underneath it all they are still the same
don't count on the cover to kill the pain
your body shakes uncontrollably
as the tears of blood roll down
at the mercy of the one they call master

given up the life i lived
for the pain i know all to well

Windows stained with the fog, words written in by a girl.

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1 posted 04-07-2003 11:05 AM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Powerful, Ri... you've still got it, babe.     Very cool writing, keep it up.

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God becomes as
we are that we
may be as he
is
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Riley
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2 posted 04-07-2003 04:06 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

Funny I expected this to be nothing. I wrote it when I was mad and read it again, its perty darn good. Thanks for replyin Brian. Check out my one in Open, its even evilier ( is that a word? )


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Windows stained with the fog, words written in by a girl.

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Great Work Riley, I really enjoyed it.
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