Your emphasis on description of your subject's nature reminded me of some of the haiku poetry I used to be into... this is the way that form is supposed to be used. Not to say this should have been a haiku, but I do admire your ability to grasp the real "nature" element like that.
And yes, this did poke a few thoughts into my head. I took it literally, but it still led me into deeper musings... blinkless eyes that sunlight cracks open and lets sprout forth like that.
I admire your ability to keep this so short and give the reader more time to just think about it... I couldn't write so much about a seed in so little space... heh... if I was the one who wrote this poem it'd be a couple pages long...
At any rate... I admire your style, and your brain. No, not the one you're eating... the one you're using.
"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche