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Safe Haven or The Youthful Rebellious Ideal

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fractal007
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0 posted 03-31-2003 01:13 AM       View Profile for fractal007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for fractal007

Why did you leave?
This is our support group
a few old boxes to sit on
guys that care and help

Dad hates me
Mom can't do nothing

The air's heavy with swearing
and smoky tear-filled love
here on the streets
Let's try and be together
we'll make our own heaven
you and I
Sounds familiar
Dad said once

We arc across the city,
driving her nuts
in our safe haven
from the serious.


2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
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[This message has been edited by fractal007 (03-31-2003 01:14 AM).]

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1 posted 04-01-2003 03:12 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

That's how it is... love isn't always hallmark cards, it can be something more complex than that, like a room full of cigarette smoke and profanity being tossed about...

I've never felt that kind of love, but you write it well, whatever it is...

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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2 posted 04-15-2003 12:43 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

I've been trying to think what I can possibly say about this peice for days, but everything I think of seems a little too bland, I don't know why but I felt that I had to say something more than "wonderful writing" but it is and I enjoyed reading it and it has fascinated me everytime I have read it. Thank you for sharing this with us
JP
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3 posted 04-16-2003 10:49 AM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

I'm begining to get into you... give me time and I will get there, I like the journey though...

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

 
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