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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Why did you leave? This is our support group a few old boxes to sit on guys that care and help Dad hates me Mom can't do nothing The air's heavy with swearing and smoky tear-filled love here on the streets Let's try and be together we'll make our own heaven you and I Sounds familiar Dad said once We arc across the city, driving her nuts in our safe haven from the serious. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 --Smit My Creations [This message has been edited by fractal007 (03-31-2003 01:14 AM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
That's how it is... love isn't always hallmark cards, it can be something more complex than that, like a room full of cigarette smoke and profanity being tossed about... I've never felt that kind of love, but you write it well, whatever it is...  Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I've been trying to think what I can possibly say about this peice for days, but everything I think of seems a little too bland, I don't know why but I felt that I had to say something more than "wonderful writing" but it is and I enjoyed reading it and it has fascinated me everytime I have read it. Thank you for sharing this with us |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
I'm begining to get into you... give me time and I will get there, I like the journey though... Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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