When I read this, I had in mind the way that you can stand someplace and just be so awestruck with what you're seeing that you can't bring it to poetry, and you feel like your poem is "dying" before it even gets to be written, "nameless and alone." Your reply told me I was wrong, but I don't care how wrong I am... that's what it made me think of.
You've got a gift for dark poetry that I wish I could borrow for a few days. Even melancholy, like the kind you use here, seems dark with your style.
Oh, and rainy light is now my favourite kind of light.
Brilliant piece, fabulously written. Definitely the best you've posted in quite a while. This goes to my private library.
"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche