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Marshalzu
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0 posted 03-13-2003 10:08 AM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

No sense.

the sirens are wailing

“Keep going”

“Keep going”

but the lumbering giant
stands still on the hill

07/03/03

Just a little poem I wrote on the way back from town.
© Copyright 2003 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-13-2003 01:46 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Well, this is uh, different.  Messed up.  Again I'm having trouble understanding what you are trying to mean with this, whether it's something simple and straightforward or a deeper, more complex concept you wish to express.  There's always so much ambiguity surrounding your work, I wish you'd write more at a time...

Unless you're one of those poets who writes to be read into, it'd be helpful to offer more to the reader so that they don't take it in the wrong direction.  Nicely written.

Parasite

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~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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2 posted 03-14-2003 11:03 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

You're a political guy, Zu. I'm going to take the entire meaning of this piece as a political stance and say that the lumbering giant is metaphorical for the current situation or a past situation. Give me a break, it's after 3am and I haven't slept properly in days. Metaphors are good for you anyway.

However! I do like it. A piece that gives the reader the ability to see whatever the hell they want is nothing but good. You've giving us freedom and only joy and rapture can come out of that.

~AF~

I'm not being rude. You're just insignificant.

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