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Is It Over?

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0 posted 02-05-2003 04:35 AM       View Profile for knightlyshadows   Email knightlyshadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for knightlyshadows

it's draining, the suck and
pull of lifes little spills of
lost humanity, rubbing their
hatred and lies and fears in my
face. pushing me to the ground and
standing there, gloating as i lose.
lose the battle of myself, and this
existence of fear and lost hope that
i'm forced to live in because i know.
i know nothing else in life than sorrow
and loss. hardship that i can't give up.
i tremble with pent up emotion that i just
need to release. release where, i just don't
know, or can even do. bringing my self to
others, showing them who and what i am. what
i need to be, who i need to be. to live, if
only i can, because right now i can't. and then,
there's nothing i can do, nowhere to turn. i'm
tapped out, purged dry when i brim with more
than you can imagine. more than i can handle.
more than i know what to do with. i need..
i need something. maybe relief. just a release.
i need help.. but no one can give it.

A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.
"You can't fight the tears that aren't coming.."
"Unconscious over my Conscious"

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (02-05-2003 04:38 AM).]

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1 posted 02-05-2003 03:39 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Oh ouch... feeling a little low, are we, Tiffany?  Don't ask how I could tell.  I'm good for that kind of thing.  

Listen babe, the key to being a happier person is just learning to sit back and enjoy.  Life's a movie, and you know something, it's a pretty good movie... even when things are going bad.  It's all about entertainment.  People can be jerks, but there are those of us who do care about you, would lift you up and dust you off when we see you laying there.  And there are also those of us who are right down there with you.

Oh by the way... nice poem.     Now go enjoy being alive.


"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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2 posted 02-09-2003 06:02 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

I believe we've all been at this place. We are filled with pain and we don't know what to do with all of it. We don't want to show it, we want to save face and to deal with alone. Sometimes we can... and sometimes we cannot. I tried to face mine alone, and ended up hurting myself very seriously. I finally did find help in God, but I won't preach to you. Everyone is different, and don't be afraid to seek out a person to help you out with this. And keep writing... don't worry about meter or verse or rhyme, just write out rants and screams... but just don't stop it. That was probably one of my biggest mistakes.

Take care, Tiff

Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ

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