Wow guy... this is just terrific. I really, really enjoyed reading this, it sucked me right in and I savoured every word and every line. You've worded it all so well that I had trouble remembering it was a poem, instead of something like, a movie, or an actual experience. So having read it only once, I can't even remember if it had any rhyme or rhythm, just because of how atmospheric it was for me...
I haven't read something like this in too long... thank you for breaking that silence for me, Ron. I'm putting this in my personal library.
Excellent, excellent work...
"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche