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0 posted 01-15-2003 05:59 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for bsquirrel

Wow... what a stinker. Delete thread, please.

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1 posted 01-16-2003 11:53 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Hm, I noticed that the thread is still here, so let's try the poem again!

Revision's nightmare

Where the dog bit in play
keeps my hand at rest.

Cannot seem to strike
a word so plain as pain.

A slow red eye
that doesn't want to close.

This skin needs some time
to sleep and recompose.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (01-16-2003 11:54 AM).]

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2 posted 01-17-2003 02:18 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Hah, I know it... revisions are a nightmare... don't you just hate it, when you can't quite seem to capture the word... I've lost some sleep over that one, for sure.  

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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Don't I know it, LP? This one's inspired by an injury I incurred while playin' with the dog. Ouch, my hand!
 
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