This is a cool little poem about facing a crowd when performing a musical act. I like your interplay between God, speaker, and audience. You do a good job in examining the various facets and dynamics of that relationship.
Sorry, but I am a bit too tired to find holes in this piece right now. Perhaps I will "lash out" at it tomorrow sometime...
"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"