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You fill my ears
-- my eyes --
my mouth.
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bobbing for the
Apple
in a bucket
full of words
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and ah, but to conceive, therein...

ultimately giving birth

to ourselves...

love ya Mikey!
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As I love you guys, too. Thanks!
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I like the implied double-meaning of "[fill] my eyes."  Usually used to describe tears welling up, but this kind of use is different from the other two, which makes the meaning of "my eyes" seem to be that you read verse, and that is how it fills your eyes...

Very cool, Mikey.  You're the king of subtlety.

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