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Awaiting her breath

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-10-23 12:12 PM

Infused, suffused.
Scatter wind, soft,
black cherry scents
her bedside way.

Not only haunted
but wanting to be
the dreams that are haunting
old lovers' eyes.

Added hellos.
Glasses of white.

Her words are picked flowers
of rain.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (10-23-2002 12:23 PM).]

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2002-10-23 03:32 PM

Wow...does that seem trite? Good lord Mike this is lovely!! I smell lavendar and old lace.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-10-23 04:09 PM

Thank you, Sharon.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-10-23 05:16 PM

and I?

"smell sex and candy..."

a stunner...her words are picked flowers of rain...my my my

'tis love.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-10-23 07:10 PM

Thank you, Miss Blaze.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

5 posted 2002-10-23 11:14 PM

this
a quick shower of brain
the slick power of pain
the mixed sour of gain

and I'm not that clever
but yes
that last line
is
fertileMike
shew.....

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2002-10-25 10:35 AM

Damn, squirrel dude

More than lovely, beautiful, in fact.

(I wanna be like Mike)

Ed

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-10-25 11:44 AM

Heh heh. Thank you both.

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