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0 posted 10-23-2002 12:12 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for bsquirrel

Infused, suffused.
Scatter wind, soft,
black cherry scents
her bedside way.

Not only haunted
but wanting to be
the dreams that are haunting
old lovers' eyes.

Added hellos.
Glasses of white.

Her words are picked flowers
of rain.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (10-23-2002 12:23 PM).]

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1 posted 10-23-2002 03:32 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wow...does that seem trite? Good lord Mike this is lovely!! I smell lavendar and old lace.
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Thank you, Sharon.
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3 posted 10-23-2002 05:16 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

and I?

"smell sex and candy..."



a stunner...her words are picked flowers of rain...my my my

'tis love.
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4 posted 10-23-2002 07:10 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Thank you, Miss Blaze.
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5 posted 10-23-2002 11:14 PM       View Profile for brian sites   Email brian sites   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian sites

this
a quick shower of brain
the slick power of pain
the mixed sour of gain

and I'm not that clever
but yes
that last line
is
fertileMike
shew.....
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Damn, squirrel dude

More than lovely, beautiful, in fact.

(I wanna be like Mike)

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Heh heh. Thank you both.
 
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