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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


0 posted 10-19-2002 01:57 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet deVine


Deeply do I feel this aloneness
Bewildered by the cause
Questions unasked
Liars unmasked
I want to speak but I pause

Rigid is my conviction
That I will leave this place
Dead is my soul
Itís under control
As is the blankness on my face

Crowds around me laughing
As I stand upon the edge
Despair, my friend,
Love, at the end
Not living up to your pledge

Quietly I slip away
You even wonít know Iím gone
Will you remember that
I was here all along?

The door closes
I cry one last time
And thus endís this poetís
Very last rhyme.
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brian sites
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1 posted 10-19-2002 02:18 AM       View Profile for brian sites   Email brian sites   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian sites

Sharon...........
the edge
is not
lonely

and
we can gather there
and talk
-----laugh
and mock it's sudden
emptiness
with our's

filled
vlraynes
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since 07-25-2000
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Somewhere... out there...


2 posted 10-19-2002 04:30 AM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


Sharon~
I realize this isn't a new write, but each time
I read this the emotions feel so raw and fresh.
I hope you're ok.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

serenity blaze
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3 posted 10-19-2002 08:12 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

and YOU

didn't even think I would notice...

*shaking my head*

Y'should KNOW better...
bsquirrel
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4 posted 10-21-2002 06:24 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

I'm glad you've shared this, Sharon.
For what you wrote,
and for what brian wrote in response.

*sigh*
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5 posted 10-22-2002 10:54 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

relate to this a great deal right now.

enjoyed the read...
wranx
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6 posted 10-25-2002 10:37 AM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

Ok Sharon,
You can sign me up too.

(You KNOW I've been there)

Ed
 
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