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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2002-10-15 02:16 PM



Here trembles
No reason stated
But it was touch
Ignited

I am too old
Too wise
too worn
for this

I have seen the dance floor
Covered in strawberry sawdust
And ground the grit
Between teeth clinched
For one more day
Just any simple way
To make it through

I have bet my hand
On red Queen’s paired
Seen the drag of win
The shove of loss
Only to be dealt
Jokers and a Jack
Against kings showing

I am too tired
Too leery of this
Much too cold

Here trembles…
Still are
Felt

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-10-15 02:42 PM


I am too tired
Too leery of this
Much too cold

Here trembles…
Still are
Felt


sigh...



Janet Marie
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2 posted 2002-10-15 05:17 PM


I am too old
Too wise
too worn
for this

I have seen the dance floor
Covered in strawberry sawdust
And ground the grit
Between teeth clinched
For one more day
Just any simple way
To make it through

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careful captain...tis the old moth to the flame tingles you are feeling...
ahhh but we do so love the warm just before  the burn dont we.......

Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining.

John O'Donohue
Conamara Blues

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2002-10-15 05:21 PM


Ser.... thanks for reading...

JM: I am too tired
    Too leery of this
    Much too cold

Much too cold and dead


Janet Marie
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4 posted 2002-10-15 06:53 PM


Capt...the moth in me wants to tell you that a "dead man" dont write with this much feeling...
but I do so understand the feeling this way.....
mothy-hugs poet sir.

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2002-10-15 07:09 PM


say you are okay?

oh man...

sigh.

LIE TO ME if necessary.

Martie
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6 posted 2002-10-15 09:39 PM


Ron

you pull emotion with this, from me, that hurts because I understand this.  Very well done, my friend!

wranx
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7 posted 2002-10-17 03:22 AM


Daddy always tole me, if you ain't got nothin'in the hole, get the hell out!

They're the cheapest cards you get.

~Ed

Cpat Hair
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8 posted 2002-10-17 08:35 AM


JM: Here trembles…
    Still are
    Felt

The life exists, but so buried perhaps it is hard to exhume. Do appreciate your comments and nice words..

Ser... Sis you know I am OK. Sure is nice to know, however that someone cares and might worry I wasn't. Hugs to you

Martie... thank you dear friend.. yes unfortunately I fear all too many people relate to the feelings... hugs to you dear one...

Ed: exactly... appreciate you taking time ot read...

bsquirrel
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9 posted 2002-10-18 03:00 PM


You just wrote the wheel
(double or nothin')

Cpat Hair
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10 posted 2002-10-18 03:16 PM


could be mikey..could be..
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