Help me with this part would you?
March behind the colors
Salute the stitches you follow
When itís time, remember
The cost of freedom you owe
not sure I am following what you want to convey...
the price of freedom I know is cliche, but inserted here it seems to make one meaning clear. Perhaps I am just struggling with the word cost... not that freedom doesn't have a cost and we owe that cost if we "use" the freedom or "buy" it. Guess I also get seperated from intent as the first two lines seem disconected from the last two...
Hey!!!. I've already said I wasn't hitting on all cylinders this morning...so it may well just be the Monday morning fog...and clear to everyone else...