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0 posted 10-07-2002 02:57 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for bsquirrel

we
  connect
    (triapse)
       through angles of sunlight,

a smile
                               unfinished;
                 confirmed.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (10-07-2002 03:00 PM).]

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1 posted 10-07-2002 03:02 PM       View Profile for brian sites   Email brian sites   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian sites

there!
a proper
spot
for this
quietness

thanks, dude
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2 posted 10-07-2002 03:06 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Thank you, Brian.
(and Serenity)

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3 posted 10-07-2002 11:46 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

You're into short works lately Mikey...I really love the sparseness of these.
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4 posted 10-08-2002 11:49 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Thanks, Sharon. Some poems just don't need as much space as others.
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5 posted 10-08-2002 03:25 PM       View Profile for Anvrill   Email Anvrill   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anvrill's Home Page   View IP for Anvrill

Yr brave, Mr. Poem-Hider. I haven't dared do a spaced poem since Sweat and a Shotgun; my one and only, and I don't think I could ever make it work again.

You make everything work.

I love you, silly baby.

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

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6 posted 10-08-2002 03:44 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Baby...guess what?

I love you.
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7 posted 10-08-2002 04:14 PM       View Profile for Anvrill   Email Anvrill   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anvrill's Home Page   View IP for Anvrill

You answered 'fore I could guess!!

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

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8 posted 10-08-2002 04:26 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Okay ...

now you're REALLY cute!

Sea-Tossed Squirrely Boy

yrs
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9 posted 10-08-2002 04:30 PM       View Profile for Anvrill   Email Anvrill   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anvrill's Home Page   View IP for Anvrill

I'm going to ignore you and initiate this the proper way.

Ahem.

*kiss*

Guess what?

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

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*kiss back* Wha'?
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I love you.

See, that's how it's done!

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

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You steal from the best.

I love you. Guess what?
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Wha', lovely?

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

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*kiss* I love you. And, also, we're such the cute couple that we're probably making people reading this physically nauseous.

Cool!

I love you, baby.

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15 posted 10-08-2002 05:22 PM       View Profile for Anvrill   Email Anvrill   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anvrill's Home Page   View IP for Anvrill

*kiss back*

Wow! Making people physically nauseous is fun!

Love you too, hon. Immensely much so.

your tongue's like poison
so swollen it fills up my mouth

rs

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16 posted 10-08-2002 05:28 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Sheesh, right at this moment, Bach's Air on a G string just started playing.

Romantic music for a romantic grrl.

Immer...
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17 posted 10-10-2002 10:46 AM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

This is such a great write, I really enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing

Andrew

ps- eww get a room
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18 posted 10-10-2002 06:51 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Andrew, thank you.
And we need more than one.
 
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