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Storms Come and Go

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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 10-04-2002 05:04 AM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom


How is the Weather? : Choka 15

Distant clouds rolling
Carrying nature’s fury
Along with tolling
Of thunder in a hurry,
Wind rips the beaches
As water pulls them to sea
Waves over reaches
Where sunbathers used to be,
In days yet to come
When the weather’s wind subsides,
And rain stops it drum
And there’s a day of low tides
Storm clouds go rolling
Darkening another sky
As the weather’s rolling by

Return to Calm : Sonnet

The trees have stopped their bending to the wind,
The waves have slacked their pounding on the sands,
People come slowly from shelter they’ve been in
To see what has fallen and what now stands.

The beaches water raped rushing waves
Tears sands and houses back into the sea,
Mementoes gone no thoughts they now can save;
Survivors alive and content to be.

Those that fled inland now slowly return,
To see what raging storm’s damage had done,
Some look stone face other cry when they learn
What little remains and all that is gone.

Slowly they one by one start rebuilding
But together they remain unyielding.

Gloom
Actually these two were wrote separately
and combined so as not to use too much space
© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 10-04-2002 04:33 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

YES---
STORMS DO COME AND GO...oops..sorry about caps, but I leave it as I think it makes a point....smiling.

love both? but the sonnet form is? (me needs t'know!)
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2 posted 10-11-2002 01:16 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

I liked both of them a lot. I think you have a great talent. Thank you for sharing this with us. I loved it.

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