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serenity blaze
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0 posted 09-30-2002 09:37 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

"So you think
you'll leave me now?"

His eyes were elegy--a song--
a dirge of note in monotone--

A zombie hoping for the dawn
of a shovel's scrape on lid...

"Leave you?",

You're already gone.
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1 posted 09-30-2002 10:06 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Yikes..sadly cutting. I sure can understand this one my friend.
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2 posted 10-01-2002 11:20 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


So why isn't this in Open?  
Oh yeah...cutting edge...

ouch.
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3 posted 10-01-2002 12:51 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Your shovel makes another appearance.
Despite your body's stay-put,
your mind is in fine rebel.

Stay sane, k? Or, at the very least, pretend it like I do.

*hug*
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4 posted 10-01-2002 07:08 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

my friend... this cuts like the dull ached slash it represents.... well said...
and as Mike said..stay sane..or at least smile and keep them guessing as to whether you are or not...

hugs to you...
 
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