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When you write,
it's early morning --
a draft of dreams
and understanding.

So let the wind
blow these pages
into the hands
of those who need them.

Asleep for some.
Awake for others.
© Copyright 2002 MPC - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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1 posted 09-27-2002 03:00 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

The words of a true poet. Enjoyed the read.

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
L cohen

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2 posted 09-27-2002 08:28 PM       View Profile for Tiersdin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tiersdin

Superbly written, Mikey...

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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3 posted 10-02-2002 02:09 PM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

Since it's a rough Draft
perhaps you won't mind me adding inside your words.

When you write,
it's early morning
lines still mind fill
a draft of dreams
and understanding.
wind thoughts quick brought

So let the wind
blow these pages
turning leaves off mind trees
into the hands
of those who need them.
holding quills thought unfills

Asleep for some.
Awake for others.
between the two as poets do

Gloom
bsquirrel
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4 posted 10-02-2002 03:00 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Nah, do with it what you want, Gloom. I'm glad my words were somethin' you could build off of.

I'm more of a minimal style myself, but I enjoy what you've added.

Thanks for readin'.
 
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