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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Ah yes, the headiness of young love, where every missed chance means darkness has engulfed the world; where every happenstance equals the sum total of all before understood and calculified for maximum import. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) My thinks perhaps there is a bit of sarcasm in this piece...tired perhaps of the over stated and under thought? nice vocabulary by the way.... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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Hi, Ron.  Nice to see you.Yep, pretty much. It's just, so much poetry is about Love, but so few actually know it (to the point of capitalizing Love). Romanticizing a complex series of ideas, memories, thoughts, emotions, scents, tastes, moments, words and shared dreams into one compact black-and-white image is nice and all, but it sure don't say much.  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hey..I LIKE being a sweet fool, Squirrel Guy! Just whaddaya mean by that there comment, Sir?  Anyways..I like this. I really do. I read it with and without sarcasm. It works either way I think. "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
No, Jenn. You're too good to fall in that trap. Your writing is like looking at the brocade on curtains in the sun, moved by a wind of breath.And actually, the intent isn't sarcastic when I wrote the poem. It's just, the subject matter itself already is. If that makes any sense. Keep writing your awesome poetry. I'll be sure to keep readin' it. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
understood and calculified for maximum import. They'll import anything these days, with the exception of maybe british beef. LOL Anyway, I going to save this and give it a few more reads, cos at the momemnt I just aint getting it, enjoyed it never the else. Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
brian, Young love feels so infinite, which makes it strange that it is finite. And, for something so infinite, it is also strange that every fight feels like the end; that every kiss feels like the beginning. Ah, sweet sweet fools. |
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