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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2002-09-18 03:01 PM


sometimes silence
helps
to kill...
sometimes hands
close ears
too tight.
Sometimes?
tongue should
be unleashed....
sometimes? someone's
love must die...

or lose a thousand more in fright--
living death of flight--alive...


Sometimes? Life?
It just ain't right.

But what else is there left to do?

© Copyright 2002 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-09-18 04:55 PM


Karen,
I'm in an angsty, reflective mood today
(when am I not? ),
and this definitely fit the bill.

s*h(r)ug*

Mike

brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
2 posted 2002-09-18 11:24 PM


sometimes life
isn't wrong
it just
forces you to find it
hiding within-
twinkling behind
the turbulent
atmosphere.
trauma makes you search
harder for it's glow
and when
fanned-
crackling
roaring
Blaze
-nothing can snuff
nothing

sing loud for me
yours,
b

Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-09-19 12:30 PM


Sometimes
it's all in my head
then
I gotta shut down
a day or two
to get back
to cool
again

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2002-09-19 03:38 PM


Thanks guys.
brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
5 posted 2002-09-20 04:09 PM


Sometimes? Life?
It just ain't right.

But what else is there left to do?


And sometimes life has a way of working out,
Hugs, Karen. Just remember every storm has a rainbow.  

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
L cohen

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