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Dee
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0 posted 08-26-2002 01:49 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dee

Six Inch Heels

Shiny and black
with six inch heels.
I love those shoes
cause they made me tall.
Tall enough
to reach heaven,
or look in your eyes
as we kissed,
which is about the same.
They're lying
on the edge of the carpet
where I took them off
when you left.
(This is for you, ya big mug love me xo)

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

© Copyright 2002 Dee Manders - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-26-2002 01:09 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

That's one lucky cup of coffee. Sorry, the big mug got me, especially since I am currently coffee-less.

Let's remedy that.

Mike
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2 posted 08-26-2002 07:17 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

awww, shucks! thanks!

actually... this was cool. i must admit that my masochistic side read the ending as a departure of emotion as well as physical presence. *grin* adding the "big mug" portion at the end, however, quickly showed me the error of my ways.
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3 posted 08-26-2002 07:50 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Can you really walk on those things???

I've known some 6 foot heels..but I don't date those anymore!
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4 posted 08-28-2002 08:56 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

*smiling at you Dee-girlie*
love this poem and this side of your pen.

  
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5 posted 08-30-2002 04:40 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Mike, you will definitely have to remedy the coffee-less situation.

Christopher, I think the heels showed him the error of my ways.

Sharon, I have trouble walking in them too but when he is about 9 inches taller than me I have to do something. And yeah I've known a few six foot heels too.


Thanks all.
Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

Dee
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Janet, glad to give you a smile, any time. I kinda like it when my pen gets a bit cheeky too.
I think the big mug enjoyed it.

love to you,
Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

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