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Wedding Vows (please help...needs to be ready for Saturday)

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Marilyn
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0 posted 08-12-2002 12:43 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marilyn

Wedding Vows
Iíve Learned the lessons of my youth,
And those within my prime.
Iíve walked through years of loneliness,
My trusting heart, my crime.

My soul grew weary with the search,
As years passed quickly by.
I never thought Iíd find the one,
Whoíd love me ( need line)

Yet here I stand beside my love,
Our vows about to say.
I thank my precious Savior, Lord,
For sending you my way.

I promise that Iíll love your soul,
Through easy, happy times.
And when the road get rougher yet,
Iíll gladly call you mine.

I promise here to speak my mind,
When something isnít right.
I promise now to listen well,
And try with all my might.

I vow to you, to give you space,
And help you respect mine.
I vow to share the heavy work,
To give us both some time.

And at the end of everyday,
We will not sleep still cross.
For anger eats away at love,
And I canít bear that loss.

Today in front of all our friends,
Our God and Family.
I give my heart to you, my love,
For all eternity.


© Copyright 2002 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 08-12-2002 10:11 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Marilyn~
Firstly ... it's lovely and best wishes are sent to the couple~

'Wedding Vows

Iíve Learned the lessons of my youth,
And those within my prime.
Iíve walked through years of loneliness,
My trusting heart, my crime.

My soul grew weary with the search,
As years passed quickly by.
I never thought Iíd find the one,
Whoíd love me beyond all time

Yet here I stand beside my love,
Our vows about to say.
I thank my precious Savior, Lord,
For sending you my way.

I promise that Iíll love your soul,
Through easy, happy times.
And when the road get rougher yet,
Iíll gladly call you mine.

I promise here to speak my mind,
When something isnít right.
I promise now to listen well,
And try with all my might.

I vow to you, to give you space,
And help you respect mine.
I vow to share the heavy work,
To give us both some time.

And at the end of everyday,
We will not sleep still cross.
For anger eats away at love,
And I canít bear that loss.

Today in front of all our friends,
Our God and Family.
I give my heart to you, my love,
For all eternity.'

Maybe ?
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Marilyn
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2 posted 08-14-2002 11:22 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Thanks for the help Marg. I have drawn a blank with that line. I was getting a bit panicked because it wasn't coming together and the wedding is only a few days away. I am the MC and I have so much I have to get ready.

Love you bunches. *hug*
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 08-14-2002 10:22 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Marilyn~
My pleasure to assist~
Have a wonderful Saturday ...
You'll make a great MC-ette~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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