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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
In harboured dreams the weathered wrecks Of past deceits and innuendoes Float aimlessly amid sad debris Of love and hate in juxtapose Mooring held with tenuous threads Snipped from a bloodless heart cast in stone Suffered pain from arrow’s piercing point Tears hidden in stifle of moan Ragged yearnings of the lonely On the shore of hope’s aspiration Desperately seeking just one heart In search of lovers salvation **Thanks to the Princely Toad for this inspiration - I'm not sure it's any good - so feel free to rip it up! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You've made his phrase yr own with this, Sharon. Want some more phrases for your thirsty drowning? |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yes please...I'm hiding here in 'no muse'ment land... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sharon -- "I drink the rain from cups of rock." |
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Toad Member
since 2002-06-16
Posts 161 |
You did a good job with the weak line I supplied far better than I could have managed. Thanks for the chance to read and reply. |
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