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Hiding behind my wifely façade
I'm walking through your shade
Living this life as your extension
Living a life that you alone made

I forget who I used to be
Before you took control
And now you keep track of me
Closer than any patrol

I wince as I take my chair
The bruise that never shows
The lesson learned from your fist
I hope that no one knows

The darkness of your shade
Envelops this tender soul of mine
And though I smile at your friends
I’m not allowed to shine
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Deep, dark, sad....well done!
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powerful challenging and disquieting images but very very well written - paul
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(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sharon, this seemed to me as an elegy of peer pressure, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hoipe everything is OK now! (sigh) May you find your pkace in the sun always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

 
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