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I wanted to make my own way
I knew how to do things and I could do them well
I was no dummy – I had some smarts
You had taught me so well
Do it carefully – do it well
Don’t be sloppy – take you time
I learned well from you
My wares were impressive
People stop me and tell me how nicely I have done
I certainly have become accomplished in my trade
But dear dad - I'm walking through your shade

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Oh this is SO good!!! I like it.
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thanks - I am wearing out though
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OH DANG Paul...this is terrific!!!
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thanks Nancy - you are too kind!! Paul
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Awww...

She said burn ... together.
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BRAVO!!! YES!!! Oh Paul, your father is a very wise man just like you and I know you are in the shade right now but you will grow on and your loving heart will too then you will teach many others this purity also! (smiles) Baby steps make up a long successful journey, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

 
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