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Goodknight
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0 posted 2002-06-21 09:21 PM


Watch the flowers wilt and fade
I was told to care for the flowers
I made a list to make sure I did all I was told
I got out the can and filled it with water
I unraveled the hoses and made much ado
I walked around and around and filled each flower with dew
This isn’t so hard I thumped on my chest
Just a little more work and I’ll have it made
But then I Watched the flowers wilt and fade



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1 posted 2002-06-21 09:23 PM


Very good and very fast!!
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2 posted 2002-06-21 09:26 PM


Welcome! I enjoyed that.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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3 posted 2002-06-21 09:29 PM


Aw...poor wittle flowers!!! Maybe they need some manure - I'm sure we have some around here someplace....
Goodknight
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4 posted 2002-06-21 09:43 PM


Nancy - thanks for the nice comments
Goodknight
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5 posted 2002-06-21 09:44 PM


thanks devine and squirrel!!
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6 posted 2002-06-22 12:30 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Paul, this is wonderful but sad, sweet friend, I hope soon the rain falls and these flowers again bloom with myriads of splendor to go around! (smiles) This is beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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