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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


0 posted 06-21-2002 08:09 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nakdthoughts


He smiled before I left
But I knew those sheets tonight will be crumpled as the sky.
Crumpled in my loneliness, wrapping my body in his almost feel.
I should have let him come, be mine body and soul this evening,
only his words left me wanting.
It was like that guitar he wrote about today,
so musically inclined he is, yet he caught and held that one note from me,
the one that vibrated with love.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 06-21-2002 08:14 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

........wow.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Poet deVine
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2 posted 06-21-2002 08:15 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

OH! You're using more than one phrase to a poem....


be careful with the 'adultness'....
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3 posted 06-21-2002 08:37 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

HEY!!! Where did you go!!!????


Get back here missy!! We've got to keep Mike in line...
Marsha
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4 posted 06-21-2002 09:05 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Maureen darling girl this is fantastic writing when I read this I could actually see the tears of lonely, and hear the I’ve lost you sigh. Absolutely perfect writing I love it love it love it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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5 posted 06-22-2002 12:45 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



BRAVO!!! Oh Maureen, this is so powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, may that one remaining note be the epilogue of this masterpiece and fill your heart with vibrations of love to eternity! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 12-18-2006 06:27 AM       View Profile for twinkyfl1   Email twinkyfl1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for twinkyfl1

I could feel the vibrations of love that flowed from your pen onto the paper in this beautifully written piece.

To thy own self be true

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 12-18-2006 06:36 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I am laughing to myself tonight~~ I don't even remember writing this one...guess it was a challenge of sorts from the response of PoetdeVine.

M
Larry C
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8 posted 12-19-2006 03:39 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

June Marie,
You do know how to find gems.

M,
I was almost slighted for not having seen this the first time. An excellent write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 12-19-2006 06:30 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Thank you Larry, but it is a "funny" thing about my writings..after they are posted, I seem to forget I ever wrote them as if it comes from another person... I actually enjoy reading them...wondering where the thoughts came from

M
Larry C
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10 posted 12-19-2006 09:14 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

M,


Just for the record, I think it's our age. I do the same thing.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 12-20-2006 05:37 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Is that what it is???

now you are making ME laugh!!!


M
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