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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-06-21 07:39 PM



like a honey jar
contained within, is your sweet
unsealed by my want

or
like a honey jar
contained within, is your sweet
sealed by my desire

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-21-2002 07:45 PM).]

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-06-21 07:47 PM


I like the golden taste of this!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2002-06-21 07:49 PM


I like the first one!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-06-21 07:54 PM


Hi Maureen...I liked the first one too!
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-06-22 12:40 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may your life forever be filled with joy and may the honeybee of your heart always kiss the nectar of your dreams! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
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Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2002-09-07 10:20 PM


I think they work well, together.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

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