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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Like a honey jar She gathers The flies Of my discontent Sticky sweet In her smiling Wickedness I hesitate To reply As she spouts Inane lies To gather You to her In clinging Passion |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Daaamn! That's all good! She said burn ... together. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sticky and clinging ..love this..you beat me to that one *s |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh Sharon, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love the metaphor you use here, and so to speak closing the lid of the jar to attempt to hold someone and usurp them in the passion which only suffocates! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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