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Like a honey jar
She gathers
The flies
Of my discontent
Sticky sweet
In her smiling
Wickedness

I hesitate
To reply
As she spouts
Inane lies
To gather
You to her
In clinging
Passion
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Daaamn! That's all good!

She said burn ... together.
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sticky and clinging ..love this..you beat me to that one *s
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BRAVO!!! Oh Sharon, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love the metaphor you use here, and so to speak closing the lid of the jar to attempt to hold someone and usurp them in the passion which only suffocates! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

 
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