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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-06-20 01:38 AM


(just feeling a bit feisty tonight)

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A shoulder turned coldly away
Does not dissuade me from my task
I do not write for what you read
For your permission I shall not ask

If I offend then do not read
Take your eyes to some other place
Hunch your shoulders in disgust
Show disdain upon your face

I have your measure now you know
your vitriol disguised in sickly sweet
but bravado fails me at the last
I shake my head in my retreat

I’m told I should not to let you win
But the fight is gone out of me
You may not care to read this but
I’ll still write MY kind of poetry



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1 posted 2002-06-20 09:00 PM


Hm, don't know if I missed something, but I LIKE your poetry.
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-06-21 02:34 PM


Amen.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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3 posted 2002-06-21 07:04 PM


PoetdeVine~
Hmmmmmm ..... me like feisty !!!
As a matter of fact ... I like this poem too !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2002-06-22 08:01 PM




(smiles) Oh Sharon, I couldn't agree with you more, sweet fried, generally I love to write lovey-dovey and cute poetry but I also ever hesitate to be rebellious when I feel like it and I am honest so when someone doesn't read it, its fine with me but I won't allow being censored, that's all! (big hugggssssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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