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serenity blaze
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0 posted 06-13-2002 07:46 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze


no one ever loved me
quite the way you claim to do
no one ever loved me
left me gasping in these shades of blue.

yes, it IS intensity--
and yes the need matches despair..
no one ever loved me much--
no one ever stole my air.

No one ever came to me
in want of my exhales.
No one loved me quite enough--
no one, matched, the way I care...

I don't need much--
just meet of me--
and that's too much
reality...
I need to touch
the mirror'd me...
I need a Hercules--
hold me?
I need you
be a part of ME.
I need you--
need you set me free.

I love you--
(if you did exist...)
I wish I could
release this wish.
I wish I wish
that emptiness
were not the tide's
relentlessness...

caving castles
built on shore
in whispers of
the evermore...
© Copyright 2002 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 06-13-2002 12:55 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

no one ever loved me
quite the way you claim to do
no one ever loved me
left me gasping in these shades of blue.

yes, it IS intensity--
and yes the need matches despair..
no one ever loved me much--
no one ever stole my air.

No one ever came to me
in want of my exhales.
No one loved me quite enough--
no one, matched, the way I care...

=============================
I need you
be a part of ME.
I need you--
need you set me free.

I love you--
(if you did exist...)
I wish I could
release this wish.
I wish I wish
that emptiness
were not the tide's
relentlessness...

caving castles
built on shore
in whispers of
the evermore...

===========================

OMG!!!!!!

moth in flames......
oh my oh my oh my.........


no one ever loved me
left me gasping in these shades of blue.

yes, it IS intensity--
and yes the need matches despair..
no one ever loved me much--
no one ever stole my air.

No one ever came to me
in want of my exhales.

=================================


OH MY indeed.....................
gaaaawwwd...I love the way you write...
and you do know you just wrote me in the moth mirror....
oh yes...you KNOW..............

the fact you wrote this on your birthday is poetic justice baby.
very very very cool write KA.

mothy me *wearing worship knee pads*

*going to get windex to clean the mirrors*


Martie
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2 posted 06-13-2002 01:41 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Wonderful writing, Karen...a heart sigh in words, but more!
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3 posted 06-13-2002 07:59 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

You are doing a lot of soul searching lately...this is excellent!
catalinamoon
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4 posted 06-13-2002 08:49 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Karen, this is amazing. I wish I could find this person, also.
Sandra
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5 posted 06-14-2002 12:27 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Thank you.
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6 posted 06-14-2002 09:41 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Serenity~

'caving castles
built on shore
in whispers of
the evermore...'



In whispers sigh
across a sea
your thoughts come
crashing back at me
Waves upon the new of sand
carving castles
Oh so grand~

Well ... suffice to say ...
I felt the brush of inspire~

Lovely thoughts .... thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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nakdthoughts
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7 posted 06-15-2002 09:57 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I don't need much--
just meet of me--
and that's too much
reality...
I need to touch
the mirror'd me...

sounds like my Alicethruglass....
You are writing and expressing very well of late.
*s
M
Janet Marie
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8 posted 06-13-2004 02:17 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

and again... look at the date on this one..

your birthday..OUR GIFT  
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9 posted 06-13-2004 11:49 PM       View Profile for brian sites   Email brian sites   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian sites

this spell was written

2 months and 5 days before
it's desire came to pass

happy birthday love
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10 posted 06-14-2004 01:03 AM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

oh my, you just ripped tears out of my eyes...
*sigh*
...here's to wishes written in ashes and blown to the wind
Hope your birthday was fantastic,
and
this poem really is a gift as Janet Marie said
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11 posted 06-14-2004 02:24 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Ahhhhhh sniff, sniff, and with that I am going to bed to dream about dreams coming true!
Happy Birthday To You, Happy Birthday To You, Happy Birthday Dear Witchiepoo, Happy Birthday Too ooo ooo ooo You!
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12 posted 06-14-2004 06:28 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ah...serene....

smiling...
wouldn't have anything
to do with slow dancing
would it?   ...

now...
when the house/cave/castle
is complete?

Will you duet with me?

[Probably won't happen until after
I get back from my trip...
but put it on your schee-du-al, puhleeze?]
serenity blaze
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13 posted 06-14-2004 06:33 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

thanks

Dark Angel
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14 posted 06-14-2004 10:07 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

OMG WOW!

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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no one ever loved me much--
no one ever stole my air.

No one ever came to me
in want of my exhales.
No one loved me quite enough--
no one, matched, the way I care...

~*~

Yes...I do know...
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Just me digging again
Janet Marie
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17 posted 07-29-2005 01:09 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

no one ever loved me
left me gasping in these shades of blue.

yes, it IS intensity--
and yes the need matches despair..
no one ever loved me much--
no one ever stole my air.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

*sigh* ... feeling this one tonite lovie.
yktikykik  

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~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~

Susan Caldwell
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Thank you JM for pulling this up.

It goes in my library and my heart.

This is me.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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19 posted 07-29-2005 01:17 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Mine too! Smiling at this ever so soft side of you.
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20 posted 08-10-2005 05:34 AM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

I have come back to read this more than three times....It is so deep and sincere. I know many of us understand your need. But in real life those who are able and would fulfill such a need are often tossed aside as being whimpy or think they might be...We can go on dreaming I guess.. I think I had such a love, but he was unable to express it openly, or could not find the ways or words... I often told myself the words I knew he would say if he but could..Does that make sense? best, martyjo
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21 posted 11-05-2005 11:38 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

He is there. Know that, never doubt. Be open, be ready, and have no preconceptions whatsoever...love is almost always a shock, when it's real, the person we suddenly love so different from the love-image we've held, and yet despite all the superficial things they ~are~ that person.....

Well...I just got caught going right into a poem's message, as though it came to me without the words at all...a mark of excellence in writing!

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22 posted 11-05-2005 12:18 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

I don't need much--
just meet of me--
and that's too much
reality...
I need to touch
the mirror'd me...
I need a Hercules--
hold me?
I need you
be a part of ME.
I need you--
need you set me free.


Serenity, this is a terrific read (as always).
Hugs2u
Coco
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23 posted 11-12-2005 01:19 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Oh, I wish, I wish that for you, too, Serenity.  I feel it, lady....you know I do.  I quite like the way your romantic and vulnerable side writes itself out, btw.  *hugs* ...jojo
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24 posted 04-20-2006 12:52 AM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

One of my favorites. Just wanted to bring it back. martyjo
 
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