I like how this poem jumps around the corners, too. Satisfyingly deep, and yet fragile enough to take a sledgehammer to and give the resulting pieces to yr friends as Christmas gifts. Oh my, I need to sleep.
Really enjoyed, C.
She said burn ... together. -TON
Pretty good, Chris. I like the combined image of jumping around corners and walls... which go well together (walls have corners!). Altogether this was almost an extended metaphor in terms of the imagery used. Very nice work.
Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored. ~Aldous Huxley